Is this a good poem?
lost in deep thought
tooken away by his actions
he played a game with the devil and lost
hes being tammed
brokendown in a deep depression
how could he do that to her
making her trapped forever
soon he will see what a mistake he made
his face turns red as blood with embaresment
of what people think
hes a ticking timebomb
he'll never last
I wrote this in my english class today do you think its good or bad?