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The Clinic

Welcome to the clinic, a place to get help and constructive criticism on your projects. Here's a brief intro on what it is, written by AngryRedhead:

"Some Instructables don't get the attention that they deserve. Many times the reason boils down to presentation, and if the presentation is off in one way or another, an Instructable might flop no matter how wonderful the project is. The presentation of an Instructable requires a certain set of skills which involve story telling, technical writing, planning, and photography. Even the most experienced technical writers and photographers still benefit from an edit or an outside opinion. As an author, it's difficult to see the flaws and errors because your thoughts and experience fill the gaps that might leave readers puzzled. It happens to every author.

If you feel you have an Instructable that isn't getting the attention that it deserves and you would like some ideas on how to improve its presentation, please post a link to it! We're not here to tear it apart or to tell you that you're the most horrible, stupidester person in the whole wide world. We're here to give you ideas for improvement and hopefully get you more attention and recognition for your project ideas. Think of this like editing or proofreading which is something everyone needs regardless of experience, intellect, and knowledge.

If you would like ideas on taking your idea to the next level and making it bigger and more awesomer, please say that you would like this extra advice. You can even post a link to an unpublished instructable if you like, but just remember, please check out the featuring checklist first since this will tell you all of the things that the best instructables have."

So... that's what this forum topic's for. There's a team of seasoned Instructables authors watching this topic, waiting to give you help!



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Kiteman1 year ago

Starting your first Instructable?

Trying to get more views for an existing project?

You need to read this guide:

https://www.instructables.com/id/how-to-write-a-gre...

Focussed on getting Featured?

You need to be aware of this checklist:

https://www.instructables.com/community/Featuring-C...

PLEASE, do not reply to this comment - you need to start a fresh top-comment for each new project or problem.

Caveat:
comments here are the opinions of those making the comments, and do not
guarantee that your work will be Featured or win a contest.

My first Instructable https://www.instructables.com/id/Paper-Mache-Penc...

Any critics will help

First of all, you are very artistic! The pictures and videos were nice as well. This is not a big deal but you might want to consider breaking the steps out instead of numbering the pictures. Nice job!

Thanks for your comment, it will help me.

Looks very well made to me.

It looks like you've added many pictures inside of pictures, which makes them turn out really small and a bit hard to see. I would recommend either using less pictures and explaining more, or separating the instructions into more steps.

I don't think everyone will agree with me though...

Thanks for your comment, it will help me.

First Instructable I've posted: https://www.instructables.com/id/LED-Rose-Bouquet-...

I LOVE feedback! Any ideas, critiques, angry comments are welcome! Just would like to polish this up and get it right so people might be able to make their own. Thank you

I'd move some of the pictures that are in the last step to the first step (intro) or take more. I like to have 2 or more pictures in the intro...

Okay I will do that...Took plenty of pictures! Thank you Yontan24

Great job on your first ible! It's a really cool idea and was well written. It might be good if you included a wiring diagram but you did a great job with lots of clear photos. One thing that might be helpful would be to link to anything you can (in the supplies) so that we know where you got your supplies from. As someone who isn't as adept at electronics I'm always interested to know where to get the best bang for my buck. Congratulations on the feature!

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