Welcome to the writers support group! Would anyone like to start off by posting some of their work?

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Goodhart5 years ago
"It was the best of times, it was the worst of times...." No of COURSE that isn't mine LOL Just looking for some life in here.....
wow, so great to find some other writers!
i love writing so much but can't seem to get enough written!
I have problems with characters, keeping everything straight, and the dreaded Wright block that can't even be called that......so ya.

So it starts out really good, ( i am a fictional writer by the way) and some ware through the dial log or second page it ends up smelling a lot like a pitcher plant.( they smell like rotten flesh).

It could start.

The knight Brian rode his trusty steed across the plain. Charging to what some would call his doom, and what others would say his fate. Yes sir Brain in all his glory was charging into the mouth of hell its self. This war was so vast and so horrid that those that thrived on such horror, turned and wept.

And it ends up some war like this.

Brain smiled " well i do think we should get going now friar tucker." tucker was his horse and right now since he had no one to talk too. THe only one listening as he whent. Brain laughed " well tucker i am loosing my mind, lets go see that little hut on the other side of this muck." they got there rather quickly. The maid came out and sighed " who are you and what do you want i don't trust easy."
" mam i am sir brain and this my steed tucker, were lost."
She smiled " all right you may stay until you find your barrings, come into my humble home."

See the problem in that....oh and this is just something a came up with to show you, trust me when it actually does happen its rather beyond lame.

The begining doesn't match up with ware i end, and dude i don't know whats wrong with the dialog all i know, is wow bie polar much?
edwarben9 years ago
Whoa! I just started a similar group the day after yours. My group is Instructable Writers. Its going to be aimed at beginners or is your group for regular writing?
Lithium Rain (author)  edwarben9 years ago
Just regular writing.
KentsOkay9 years ago
Here's some of mine (yah i know errors abound in it)
Lithium Rain (author)  KentsOkay9 years ago
It's good...I don't like ghost stories, but well written.
Psst... It's not a ghost story!
Lithium Rain (author)  KentsOkay9 years ago
Really? Those weren't ghosts? I like 100 times more then! :) A few small things, if I may: 1 At one point your character's internal dialogue goes like this: "Don't start thinking like that." and then you say, "he mused". I would suggest a different word, he isn't really musing there. 2 From what I understand, his parents were just killed...unless he deals with it later, he seems very hardhearted-his only thought on the matter is whether he will have to live with his aunts, whom he dosen't like. Or is he just detached, in shock? Other than that, it's brilliant! I really did enjoy it. Is there any more to it?
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