first time instructable publish would like review and suggestions for improving next

just published first instructable on 4/20/13 and i would like review and constructive comments for further publishes.  not sure when it will be on site. title is heated handlebar grips under motorcycle.  thank you. and i hope this first one looks and relays info properly.

maguyver (author) 3 years ago
Thank you for input. Good ideas. I did not know how in depth to get. Can it still be edited?
Kiteman3 years ago

Two quick improvements to the write-up; use a "finished" image as your first introduction image, and use capital letters at the beginning of sentences.

For the project itself, I would also add a fuse to the circuit for safety, and maybe even wire it in after the ignition switch, so you can't accidentally flatten the battery.