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Crafted2983 years ago

its ok

Kiteman3 years ago

It's wrong, very wrong.

The way you place punctuation marks is downright painful to look at!

Triclaw (author)  Kiteman3 years ago

is it that bad ? I will take another look at it .

Kiteman Triclaw3 years ago

Was it not deliberate?

Triclaw (author)  Kiteman3 years ago

no I was not going for bad punctuation marks . that's some thing that I have always struggled with .(I had or have a bit of a learning disability with English)

Kiteman Triclaw3 years ago

It's the way you finish the sentence .You should put the period immediately after the last letter, not immediately before the next. Do you see how the point before "You" looks odd?

Triclaw (author)  Kiteman3 years ago

I see that I did go through and fix some things I first missed

I think it's pretty funny!

that's what I am going for and trying to get it some attention ,salads are boring

Well, you certainly made it exciting and fun to read!

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