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It still says "Fresnel lens" in step 3.
Haha, you forgot https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Coffee_enema :P
Meh.. it looks nicer, but it only really has a couple of extra tools - the ruler and the box opener. The ruler and the spanners are double counted. The screw driver position looks better, but yours looks simpler over all, and less likely to go wrong... I think I would probably make it a bit thicker though, and maybe add a box cutter.
OP is male..
When is that a problem??
(I agree that more storage space in general is not necessarily good, but more tools never hurt).
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