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Alright for lack of a better name for now this is just TheDunkis' Assault Pistol. It's a compact pistol made specifically for war. I did make a video but I can't upload it using my mom's computer so...yeah. Anyways they're three things that make this the almost ideal war weapon.
1. It's compact. Usually no wider than the average person at the age of...I don't know I'm skinny so probably a 12 year old lol so it should be easy enough to carry around as a secondary weapon.
2. High Cap magazine. It holds I think around 25 green rods. I know green rods aren't the best rounds but typical wars happen in homes where distance doesn't count as much and for bigger battles it would be more of a secondary weapon.
3. Removable magazine. It's based off of Zak's from KI. It clips in and out really easily but it's really sturdy so it should never fall out even if you're shaking it around.

Alright so as I figured the gun wasn't enough to make it through. I still wanted my own assault pistol that works though (I'm hoping that we shift over from side arms to these as they'll be easier to make original). This is based off of the original in some design like the handle. It uses what I believe to be the first slanted and open magazine for blue rods. Why slanted? Simple three reasons. 1. It looks kind of cool. 2. It acts as a hand guard. 3. It's keeps it compact so it's not sticking out but it also feeds ammo towards the front more so that it gets more power. That's the main reason anyways. I have plans for this gun if I keep it around anyways. This is the simplest design with no special details or anything but I'm hoping to make a smaller and larger version with extra features. For example the larger will most likely shoot yellows possibly with a removable magazine and a stock. The smaller will use white rods maybe with a slide and maybe with the magazine in the handle (although with a similar open mag style. I figured it out I just need to figure out how to connect them).

Here's what I rate this new version compared to the old one. *newer version
1. Size Efficient. 4/5 It's compact but not as small as it can be. *4/5 It's pretty much as compact as it will get but you could make it ultimately smaller.
2. Power and Range efficiency. 3/5 At the moment it's about average but I havn't really perfected the firing system. Sometimes it doesn't even fire well at all so I have some work to do. * 4/5 It's a whole lot better now. It's decently powerful for its size but obviously not a sniper or anything.
3. Accuracy. 3/5 I haven't honestly tested it a lot yet only enough to know that it fires but by the time I'm done hopefully this should updated to be a 4 even though it's more of a CQC gun. * 4/5 I tested it a couple of times and it hits very close with the sight I'm using. Still not perfect.
4. Easy, fast loading. 5/5 With removable magazine that is super easy to put in and pull out this is one of those "as good as it gets" in the fast loading department. * 3/5 Ugh this is where it fails. The good news is that it's still pretty to load. All you need to do is push blue rods through the barrel. No need to be precocked nor do you need to hold the pusher down just push the blue rods in and down. Should hold about 10 blue rods maybe more.
5. Handling. 4/5 pretty standard I guess. The handle ain't bad and the trigger is smooth enough. So far the gun doesn't work the way it should but that will be fixed before I'm done obviously. The magazine area makes for a good forehandle when not using the shroud. * 4/5 Still pretty standard expect I traded around a couple things. The angled magazine does not make for a good foregrip. It works but I don't care for it. The handle is the same but the back was changed to be a little more comfortable. The trigger works better.
6. Cocking. 3/5 Not super bad and not super good. I'm not sure if I should put a slide on or not. * 3/5 same old same old.
7. Looks. This is another one of those love it or hate it things but I think it looks good all but the support on the bottom which I put on for more of function than looks but I do think the gun looks better with it. * I'm not sure which I like better. I struggled with the looks on this one for awhile and tried adding a lot of pieces. I finally ended up getting rid of pieces instead until I finally got what I wanted. I think this version looks better good.
8. Reliability 2/5 So far I'm not going to lie the gun isn't the best but like I said it ain't working right by the time I'm done I'll make sure it's working 99.9% 5/5 The only problem so far is that sometimes two shots try to go at once and they just fall out from the friction. It only happens if you don't load the ammo right. Edit: Fixed updated design doesn't jam anymore.
9. Other features. +1 (judged on about how good the extra features are. Anything that doesn't fit above will be included in the score which will add the amount of points as a bonus into the final score) It has a simple rail nothing to special and a simple mock silencer shroud for the barrel with a forehandle. I think it makes it look better but bigger. * +1 this version doesn't have anything super special. The best is the open magazine which I figure deserves a +1 on it's own considering how useful they are.

God any other ideas for my newer gun? I'll probably want to post but I also want to work on a Master Sword V2 really soon and I need all my pieces for it. I might go out and buy another bucket soon but if I don't then this might go by by. I'll try getting a video as soon as I find what I need for the camera>computer hook up for videos. How do you think it would compare to the BBKWG and Spiff (along with the other APs those are just the most popular)?

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gabhoot (author)2009-02-05

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amtdude (author)2008-11-28

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TheDunkis (author)amtdude2008-11-28

It's gone... but I have two alternatives for you. I'm working on my official assault pistol and am about to get a picture or I'm going to make an MP7 with the same type of removable clip in the handle.

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barrax (author)TheDunkis2009-01-20

your old age pensioner lol. OAP

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knexguy (author)barrax2009-01-20

Yeah, hopefully he doesn't name it that :)

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barrax (author)knexguy2009-01-20

lolz, i hope he does, not being nasty though

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barrax (author)knexguy2009-01-20

lolz/ quick reflexes huh? 1 minute away

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knexguy (author)barrax2009-01-20

Lol, I just got a comment for Yerjoking that was posted 0 seconds ago..

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yerjoking (author)knexguy2009-01-28
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barrax (author)knexguy2009-01-20
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knexguy (author)barrax2009-01-20

I CAN'T BEAR TEH TENSIONZ!

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TheDunkis (author)knexguy2009-01-27

...what making fun of me for not posting either of the two? Just so you know I remade and finished my official AP and I attempted the MP7 but failed (and I couldn't be bothered to tell that everywhere I mentioned it.) I'll grab a picture tomorrow.

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knexguy (author)TheDunkis2009-01-28

No, I was replying to Barrax about something unrelated. But I'd still like to see the pics.

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knexguy (author)TheDunkis2008-12-16

>:( I'm making an MP7. But yours will probably be better.

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TheDunkis (author)2009-01-27

Alright guys I mashed the parts of my "Injector" which was the code name for my single shot pistol (and I called it that because it looked like some futuristic needle shooter or something) with the design of my AP and now it's nearly perfect. It's a lot more powerful with a lot better accuracy. I haven't tested it with more than one piece of ammo in the magazine but I did with one and the reliability seems to be better. The pin still catches the rod but I'm hoping to fix this. And even if I don't you just have to pull it back until the magazine adjusts and the pin is able to make it through. I'll get a picture tomorrow if I get the chance. I'm posting this version for sure. Lol I'm on a posting roll. Maybe 4 guns in 1 month.

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knexguy (author)2008-12-16

:S I don't get it. How does this help?

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bakenbitz (author)2008-11-02

I like it, but can at least one of your guns not need tape? Almost every gun made by you requires that parts are taped together.

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TheDunkis (author)bakenbitz2008-11-02

Really hardly any really need tape. This is the first major exception and I know but parts just won't work without it and you can't really make a better part for where they are. Sorry I'll try using less of it next time after all all of us don't have enough tape...it's in short supply for some reason these days...

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shadowninja31 (author)TheDunkis2008-11-03

or u could use duct tape. everyone loves that

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DJ Radio (author)shadowninja312008-11-29

duct tape is a bit much........ try masking tape

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knexfan9182 (author)DJ Radio2008-12-15

no blue painters tape thin and strong stick to it

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yeah but duct tape wont break

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shadowninja31 (author)DJ Radio2008-11-29
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DJ Radio (author)shadowninja312008-11-29

I can break it with my bare hands....

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DJ Radio (author)TheDunkis2008-11-28

Heh, I needed tape when the trigger on my AR-4 commando v2 started breaking... I put it on the gap where it was breaking, and its fixed....

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bakenbitz (author)DJ Radio2008-11-28

Why did you comment on these old comments?

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DJ Radio (author)bakenbitz2008-11-28

I thought this was a new fourm

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bakenbitz (author)DJ Radio2008-11-28

Look up. Notice how TD's comment is Nov 2, 2008 and yours is Nov 28, 2008.

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yerjoking (author)TheDunkis2008-11-02

Not really, I got a massive roll of big brown tape, 99p, prolly like $2 or something.

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TheDunkis (author)2008-12-14

I added a new trigger which get's better power. I'm hoping to post really soon.

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TheDunkis (author)2008-12-03

Alright I made another pistol (along with my other one. I think I'll start a series o_O) that--well I can't spoil everything but I'll start by saying that it uses a new never seen before (or at least I don't think so) magazine. It will also use a new very simple trigger that blocks behind the handle. It is made up of only a few pieces. It will work on almost all guns with a similar style to my own and that includes the AP I have in the first picture.

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TheDunkis (author)2008-12-01

This comment string is going to stop.

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TheDunkis (author)2008-11-01

Hey guys I'm wondering one thing. Should I scrap this and turn it into a Max-10? It would be a better version of the Mac-10 although it would still fire green rods. I don't know if you guys disagree then I'll make a dark grey one after the contest but otherwise I'll swap it up right now. I liked the magazine idea and figured it would be perfect. The reason being I need a new gun to replicate. This was going to be a tec-9 but it just wouldn't work out that way so what about a Max-10?

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TheDunkis (author)Trauts2008-11-01

Lol darn it dude we just started thinking ideas for the XM8! Should I destroy this quickly and make the Max 11 as fast as possibly, post that, and then work on the XM8? I need to get more pieces but I'll have to wait until christmas for that. I have my money tied up in getting some games like CoD5.

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yerjoking (author)TheDunkis2008-11-02

I'M GETTING COD5, whats your xbox thingy? Mines...... Nips1337...... Please, don't ask, lol.

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Der Bradly (author)yerjoking2008-11-02
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bakenbitz (author)yerjoking2008-11-02

I friended you. Just go on xbox.com and sign in. You can send friend requests and messages.

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yerjoking (author)bakenbitz2008-11-02

Okay, but I won't be online much, I don't have many games, but I'm getting COD5 and GOW2 so I'll be online more once I get them on xbox live :)

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