these are all these rhymes i made up at school when I was bored.
9 years ago
9 years ago
xD just something the evil me did...
I wrote this once, it's not my best, but most of the stuff I write is quite...personal. So I'll show you this: We, the people of the nation All part of the plan: the master formation Of those who dictate us since society began We are the bricks in the wall of the master plan We never see what we are: just know our place In this farcical so called "Human Race" Like robots we obey every word Of the higher powers: how absurd! We are in the system, the master plan Nobody knows except those in the clan The clan we call our government The ones with minds so incredibly blunt What are the laws? What are the hours? With which we obey from the higher powers? 9 til 5? Everyday Work like clockwork as our brains decay Can't we see the bigger pictures? The thing right before us: right in life's scriptures? Of course we can, but never see The dictators who never let us be Bricks in the wall. Figures on the chess board Irrelevant, pointless: completely ignored Will people ever know the name "******* Lowne"? No, the system will make sure I drown Because society is the bane of sanity Controlling, our minds; thoughts: humanity The plan that dictates us, day in and day out So I say everybody, please, jump up and shout: "We will not be, we will not be bricks in the wall, The pawns of the powers, the fighters in the brawl, The robots of the leaders, governors, kings Controlling, manipulating us with strings" "We won't have any strings to hold us down, Jump up, do what we want, be a clown Because society surely is just that: The master plan, the fat cat." So I say to you all when you go to work or school To look around at the other bricks that fuel The legions of leaders, the grand master plan T he unbreakable system, the converted scam Break free from the ranks, stick two fingers up high Up to the powers, I dare you to try Beating the system, prising out from the wall Unlawful robot, dysfunctional tool See what they'll do, they'll lock you away With the rest of the pitiful, desperate prey That the masters disliked for exposing their clan Of the unbreakable, indestructible, grand master plan. As you can see, I starred out my name (*) lol :-D
You're a pretty good poet.
Your welcome. By the way, is this something you do as a hobby, or did you just happen to write this poem?
English homework :P
I see... So you must be a natural.
Lol i did use a ryhming dictionary, so it was made a tad easier XD
They make life so much easier.
wowz, thats pretty good. do you usually do stuff like this?
Sometimes lol. Listening to Eminem is surprisingly useful when writing poetry XD
? well you could steal his rhymes and replace the words. how old where you when you wrote that? im not a stalker its just it sounds like it was written by a wise old man.
LMAO! I'm under 16 I'll say that, and no, nothing from here was stolen, lol, read every eminem/linkin park lyric if you want XD
hmm. i posted all this into google, and it came up with a well known poet. hmmmmmm...
Eh? Show me, it would be interested as all of these were written by me. When you say you posted them in google, did you cut and paste the entire poem? If you don't think I wrote them, gimme a topic and I'll write a poem about it (try not to make it something stupid like...llamas eating mouldy cheese, try and make it broad)
Look at you up there, king of the hill
Money, fame, power, what a thrill!
But you say no to signings, shove away fans
"The Common people and their pathetic plans"
But never at all even think to forget
That you are forever in our debt
Because most of you superstars are unaware
That we're the ones that got you there
We're the ones that bought your stuff,
Praised you, promoted you well enough
We're the ones who bought your songs,
The albums, calenders: all these wrongs
All these wrongs, because you threw it back
Back in our faces the twisted attack
And don't deny this, you know it's true
We're the ones who made you you.
So don't say no when we ask for a signing
And answer mail with golden lining
Respect us like we respected you
Because we deserve our values too
You're not above us! We're above you!
Without us who would you be? WHO!
That's right, a no-one, just like us
Common: buying discounts, using the bus
So I say once more, never ever forget
And correct these errors set them back
Stop this relentless, twisted attack
Respect us, because you know it's true
That we're the ones who made you you.
Sounds like something Linkin Park would sing, it sounds like an awesome song!
10 years ago
Jack and Jill
Jack and jill went to iraq to fetch some bombs and guns
Jill blew up so jack decided iraq wasn’t that fun
Jack went to america, and got some rum instead,
And started smoking and drinking,until the rum caught and blew up his head.
Humpty dumpty sat on a building,
With a big bad gun and started killing
All the little girls and boys
Who ate the eggs and broke their toys
But humpty dumpty slipped and fell
And his brains and guts came out of his shell.
And all the swat teams and handymen,
Couldn’t eat another egg again
Knick knack bloodyWACK!
This stupid guy, was very shy
He couldn’t sing a nice lullaby
So with knick knack paddywack chic chic BAM!
The carcass was no longer a man.
Little Bo peep
Little Bo Peep shot a sheep
Just to see it die
then dropped the gun on the ground
with a thud BANG sound
and blew her brains into the sky.
Twinkle twinkle lots of brains
I love the taste of your membrane
Shining up my nose you’ll see,
lots of tasty green bogeys,
twinkle twinkle dead meat sliver
when fried you taste like raw liver
give credit if you use my rhymes please.
o.O you're a very violent person xD
that would have been true last year. lolz personal reference.
no as in i laugh out loud laugh out loud.
10 years ago
If they were metered properly, they may be a bit better :-)
agreed! very well said! But they are still pretty good!
what do you mean?
When you have a metered rhyme
It has a pace you see.
The emphasis on beat and time
They come so easily.
sry the hunpty dumpty and knickknackbloodyWack got put together accidentally