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Hi !

I need some of your help again ...........

I've wrote a tiny instructable which have been rejected.
As it is about writing french poetry in english, I have no clue about how I could improve it ........
Or maybe writing english poetry following french rules make no sense at all ??

Please help !!

https://www.instructables.com/id/How-to-write-Alexandrines-.../

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Kiteman
Kiteman

13 years ago

Maybe add images to the imageless steps that are linked to the content of the Alexandrines? A sleeping dreamer for step two? An angel for step three?

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chooseausername
chooseausername

Reply 13 years ago

Finding illustrations or material to create them is not that easy ..........

Thanks for your advice. I'm working on that.

=o)

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Kiteman
Kiteman

Reply 13 years ago

Since it's not really vital to the 'ible that the images be photos, why not sketch them yourself and scan them?

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chooseausername
chooseausername

Reply 13 years ago

Unfortunately, I'm not a good drawer, and my scanner does not work .... =oP

But I think that the pictures I added are good enough, because Randofo did not reject this instructable a second time.

It will never appear on the first page of the list, but at least it's published .....

Thanks Kiteman for your concern =o)

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Bran
Bran

Reply 13 years ago

It will never appear on the first page of the list, but at least it's published .....

But at least you are helping someone, somewhere. Like me, who didn't know what an alexandrine was. Thanks!

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Brennn10
Brennn10

13 years ago

Maybe you could add some more pictures, if you can. You can have a couple steps without pictures, but it makes the Instructable more marketable if there are pictures included. How about a picture of an example of the literature, or something along those lines.-

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chooseausername
chooseausername

Reply 13 years ago

Thanks for your advice. I'm trying to find some relevant illustrations.

=o)