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I made an animation would you look? Answered

https://apps.facebook.com/jostensvideocontest/index/share/video/227/

This is my first "Actually planned" animation. 

I used Toon Boom Animate for the video. 
My best friend uses audacity for the audio. 

Any opinions?

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Burnsides
Burnsides

9 years ago

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ku_FJcDKYcQ

Sorry, I forgot the facebook thing. There's a youtube link.

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lemonie
lemonie

Reply 9 years ago

It's nicely done, but I don't like it (personal opinion, not to be taken negatively)

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Burnsides
Burnsides

Reply 9 years ago

Hey, I don't take it harshly man. Don't fret.

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lemonie
lemonie

Reply 9 years ago


It's the leaves.
Fallen leaves are dead, they end up rotting. Nutritious if in the ground, but I don't go with the yearbook thing.
It's essentially saying that organic-waste goes into the yearbook. There's other ways of representing ideas than fallen-leaves, falling-leaves are sort of sad, aren't they?
(Or am I a bit off on this?)

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Burnsides
Burnsides

Reply 9 years ago

Not to be mean, but I think your a little off.

In the beginning it says that your brain is like a tree and the ideas are like leaves. It's all just a little bit of word play. Its just meant to be a nice little cartoon...

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lemonie
lemonie

Reply 9 years ago


It is a nice cartoon, I was probably getting too far into the symbolism in there.

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NachoMahma
NachoMahma

Reply 9 years ago

. I like it. Some of the wording sounds a little awkward at times but the animation itself is excellent.

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Burnsides
Burnsides

Reply 9 years ago

:D Thank you!

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lemonie
lemonie

9 years ago


Is this posted anywhere else (not on F-Book)

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Goodhart
Goodhart

Reply 9 years ago

It appears to be a contest entry.....

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Goodhart
Goodhart

9 years ago

It would have been nice to be forewarned of this being:

Jostens Commercial Contest


And not only do you need an account at FB (what Lemonie is complaining about) but it asks for all my information....which I am not willing to "just give out" to anyone.