I made my first instructable,give me some tips so that i can improve the way of making a instructable. Answered

In that particular project, you need a lot more detail.

For instance, when you say "First of all start by creating models in 3ds max", you are skimming over five or ten steps-worth of instructions!

After that, think about the look of the writing (bold and italics are best used as emphasis).

Start here:

https://www.instructables.com/id/How-to-Write-an-Instructable-1/

Then edit to fit this:

https://www.instructables.com/community/Featuring-Checklist/

If you still need help, try here:

https://www.instructables.com/community/The-Clinic/