Oscar the grouch sculpting video time lapse feedback? Answered

hi guys i made a video time lapse.. it's my 3rd one.. its not the greatest but i wanted to get some feedback from you guys

i think i found a good angle to show how i sculpted the figurine

let me know what you think

https://www.instructables.com/id/How-to-make-a-sculpey-Oscar-the-Grouch-Figurine-wi/