formal letter help Answered
Hello, I have some skill in php language, but my english language is far from good. I have never lived in english speaking cities, so I know, that I can't write a good letter. Most of the times my sentences feel "foreign", I think.
Now I have to write letters to some tourist offices, and I don't want to be too "foreign".
I would be really glad, if you could check this letter:
First let me introduce myself. My name is XYZ and I work with COMPANY-NAME. I would like to pay/draw your attention to our website (by) providing you with free possibility/opportunity to introduce/present your region/the region represented by you.
WEBSITE-NAME is a brand new website. The site is primarily a free travel blog where anyone can share his/her travel experiences, can show the sights located around his/her home, can prepare maps or can upload other travel related articles. We sort the articles based on travel categories and regions and our long-term goal is to establish a database where visitors can get useful information on numerous touristical possibilities all over the world.
We would be glad/pleased if your region / the region represented by you appears on our website. In case you are interested in the appereance possibility on our website, you can review it via this link.
After a brief registration you can introduce your region on our site. You can upload photos, share your links and attach maps, as well.
I really hope that our website could arouse your interest. It would be grateful if you blog on WEBSITE-NAME.
We are looking forward to hearing from you soon. Should you have any questions regarding the website, please feel free to contact us.
So this would be the letter. (?)