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Hi! I've been writing a story for about a month now and decided togive you all a sneak peak. I will be posting the whole thing once it's done. I will be trying to include some pictures as well. I hope you enjoy it!
Here's the first Chapter:

DRAGON SAMURAI
Chapter 1
The ninja


I woke with a start to the sounds of bells and shouts ringing in my ears. I jumped out of my futon and ran to the window. It was a dark and cloudy day. I saw a large crowd swarming towards the Emperor’s palace. Thousands of peasants and merchants were slowly surrounding the palace. Shouts drowned the sound of birds flapping away from the roaring crowd. I quickly changed into my kimono and ran downstairs without making my futon (my mother was going to kill me when I got back) and ran outside ignoring what my mother was saying. I followed the crowd and ran into my friend Hiroshi.
“Good morning, Ryu,” he said.
“Good morning Hiroshi,” I said. “Do you know what the commotion is about?”
“All I know is that it has something to do with the Emperor.”
“What would the Emperor do at this time in the morning?”
“I have no idea.”
If I remember right the Emperor is the kind of guy who stays in bed until eleven in the morning. Just try and imagine a tall puny man who only knows how to govern an empire who needs body guards at all times. If you can imagine that you probably have a good idea of what the Emperor looks like. The only time I’ve actually seen him is when he came for a walk through town but even then he was completely surrounded by guards. The reason I knew so much about the Emperor is because my uncle was one of his personal servants.
Hiroshi and I continued to follow the crowd and the palace was coming into sight. Its beautiful building was surrounded by a large stone wall to keep out intruders. The roofs of the pagoda could barely be seen over the wall. Hiroshi pushed forward through the crowd. We eventually got to the front of the palace gates and Hiroshi had cleared a nice amount of room for us. I smiled. His name may mean generous but he wasn’t very generous when it came to giving space. I could hear the crowd around me mumbling to each other. Some said the palace was invaded overnight. Others said that the Emperor would declare the heir to the throne.
After several minutes the doors creaked open and the Emperor’s representative slipped out the door with a very serious expression on his face. Questions exploded but the representative just stood there calmly waiting for the crowd to quiet down. Hiroshi nudged me in the ribs.
“I vote we go and get noodles after the announcement,” he said.
“Always thinking with your stomach aren’t you?” I said. We both giggled while the crowd settled down. The representative opened his mouth to speak. Now the next few seconds were the slowest of my entire life! The representative carefully mouthed the words “The Emperor has been kidnapped.” A gasp arose from the whole crowd. No sooner had he uttered the words than a shuriken (a ninja star) embedded itself in his chest. Everyone looked straight down at the dying man but I looked in the opposite direction. Where the Shuriken had come from stood a dark figure on the rooftop. He caught my eye and we stared at each other for what seemed like forever. Then he turned and darted off into the horizon. It was a ninja! That scary moment when our eyes met I saw something familiar in the figure’s eyes. He must have been at least fifty metres away from where I stood but I couldn’t help noticing something familiar in those eyes. I couldn’t identify what it was but I decided not to think about it at the moment. I stared at the man with blood seeping from his robes. He lay motionless while his heart slowly failed. As I stared into the eyes of the dying man, a chill ran down my spine. Hiroshi turned to me with a perplexed expression. The guards surrounded the man and pushed everyone back. The crowd slowly abandoned the palace gates and we eventually left as well. As we walked back down the road I noticed a man walking towards the palace. We locked eyes and I suddenly knew who he was. He was a Samurai.


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RNB

7 years ago

^Yes, me neither. Seems like you changed things, isn't it Tornado?

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Tornado96RNB

Reply 7 years ago

The question is is it better that way?

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RNBTornado96

Reply 7 years ago

Yes, it is better. It's a easier introduction, you don't fall immediately in the story.

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Tornado96RNB

Reply 7 years ago

You sound like my English teacher...

I'm glad you like it!

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RNBTornado96

Reply 7 years ago

WAIT... Why do I sound like a English teacher?

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Tornado96RNB

Reply 7 years ago

just the way your saying it :-P

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Sorunome

7 years ago

:( first i thought it was a preview of you're ball machine...

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SorunomeTornado96

Reply 7 years ago

sorry, i didn't had time to read it...

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Tornado96Sorunome

Reply 7 years ago

I hope you do and I hope you enjoy it. :-)

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Tornado96Sorunome

Reply 7 years ago

lol soon young padawan very soon (a week or two)

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Shadowman39

7 years ago

Cool, this is the story you PMed me. Will you get it published? :-P