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I found a poem I wrote from 3rd grade! Answered

On my computor, I found a poem I wrote when I was in 3rd grade! Here it is: Bother Oh the people you bother, You sister, your father, Your brother, Your mother, And they always say, "GO OUT AND PLAY!!" And I say no "What if it'll snow?" No one will know Until the next day. Oh the people you bother, Your sister, your father, You brother, Your mother, And they leave the room. So I take out the vacuum. I sucked up their cheeks, and I sucked up their nose, I went outside and squirt them with a hose. And then they say, "GO OUT AND PLAY!!!" And I say no "What if it will snow?" No one, no thee, No more than three, Will know until the next day. I guess it's pretty good for a 3rd grader!

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techguru14

5 years ago

It's always nice finding stuff from when you were a kid.

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InvaderDig

9 years ago

Very cool. I see a movie being made of this in about six months... starring Nicholas Cage.

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DrWeird117

9 years ago

Reminds of Suess.

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FlumpkinsDrWeird117

Reply 9 years ago

Hahaha about 5 people have said that (Including me)

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FlumpkinsDrWeird117

Reply 9 years ago

Do you know the song Chocolate Rain? If not just look it up. Here are my lyrics Orange Pee, Can someone tell me what is wrong with me? Orange Pee, When It was yellow I was full of glee Orange Pee, Elmo Says Ha haha tickle me! Orange Pee, Teach my toenail how to water ski Orange Pee, My half brother half sister ate a bee Orange Pee, I eat blue socks out of a red box, SHANIQUA

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DrWeird117Flumpkins

Reply 9 years ago

How dare you make fun of a politically and morally loud song.

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FlumpkinsDrWeird117

Reply 9 years ago

I'm not the only one to. There are many other people.


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Katarukito

9 years ago

i wrote a poem about asians , it was funny.

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FlumpkinsKatarukito

Reply 9 years ago

That's a weird coincidence. They were talking about Chinese baseball players on Sports Soup (Show)

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dombeef

9 years ago

Wow!

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skunkbait

9 years ago

That's good! I wrote a pretty good one in 1st grade, but got terrible marks for it. My teacher was too traditional to dig freeform beat!

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skunkbaitFlumpkins

Reply 9 years ago

It was just a regular, standard form, 4 line per stanza poem, with every other line rhyming. I only remember the mis-matched, "free-form" ending. The fat Cat, Sat, On the man's Tan Hat..... And the man flipped!

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kelseymh

9 years ago

Very nice!

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DJ Radio

9 years ago

With just the right mods+touches, I could make this a good rap!

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FlumpkinsDJ Radio

Reply 9 years ago

Sure, why not? I should try that sometime and post it on YouTube... it would be kinda dumb though.

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Lithium Rain

9 years ago

Haha, cute. Almost Suessian.

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FlumpkinsLithium Rain

Reply 9 years ago

Yerp. When I first wrote this that is the first person I thought about