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hey im writing a chapter story and i need some tips help and suggestions

o.k here is what ive got

there are 2 main characters chuck and jeff they are best friends chuck is a iraq veteran who got kicked out for traces of class a drugs and jeff is a serious gamer
they both live in a chicks hous (yet to be named) and they go to liberty city for a illegal weapons deal but the buyers turn out to be cops and they just escape but they get caught and end up in prison but with bribing they get out but theyre still wanted alsothey meet a guy called tristan who helps them to get an old friend out (HAYD) and thats when i run out of ideas so can you help me
by the way it is action/comedy

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NZ_DEATHEAGLE

8 years ago

the chick is jessie
comedy angle more of a southpark angle
illegal wepons well i wanted  story with illegal wepons this isnt for fame its just fun and yeah

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lemonie

8 years ago

What's the comedy angle?
Who is this "chick"?
Why the illegal weapons-deal?

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