I made an animation would you look?

https://apps.facebook.com/jostensvideocontest/index/share/video/227/ 

This is my first "Actually planned" animation. 

I used Toon Boom Animate for the video. 
My best friend uses audacity for the audio. 

Any opinions?

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Burnsides (author) 6 years ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ku_FJcDKYcQ

Sorry, I forgot the facebook thing. There's a youtube link.
It's nicely done, but I don't like it (personal opinion, not to be taken negatively)

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Burnsides (author)  lemonie6 years ago
Hey, I don't take it harshly man. Don't fret.

It's the leaves.
Fallen leaves are dead, they end up rotting. Nutritious if in the ground, but I don't go with the yearbook thing.
It's essentially saying that organic-waste goes into the yearbook. There's other ways of representing ideas than fallen-leaves, falling-leaves are sort of sad, aren't they?
(Or am I a bit off on this?)

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Burnsides (author)  lemonie6 years ago
Not to be mean, but I think your a little off.

In the beginning it says that your brain is like a tree and the ideas are like leaves. It's all just a little bit of word play. Its just meant to be a nice little cartoon...

It is a nice cartoon, I was probably getting too far into the symbolism in there.

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. I like it. Some of the wording sounds a little awkward at times but the animation itself is excellent.
Burnsides (author)  NachoMahma6 years ago
:D Thank you!
lemonie6 years ago

Is this posted anywhere else (not on F-Book)

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It appears to be a contest entry.....
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